An interesting a strongly proficient response. If you have time to do the following revisions by Sunday this could place your response at Level 4.
A sloppy reference to Tarantino using slow motion, you need to provide an example (what film/s.
Characters: You have used the generic convention of placing the girl as victim, for example in films such as Animal Kingdom when Josh's girlfriend is entrapped with Josh's Uncle Pope. On the other hand you could explain that unlike thrillers such as Once Upon a Time in America you have placed a female at the centre of the action. The photography student is placed in a threatening position similar to Thelma who encounters the rapist Harlem in the carpark, and like Thelma and Louise you place a strong female at the centre of the action.
Hopefully you can make these not too daunting revisions.
An interesting a strongly proficient response. If you have time to do the following revisions by Sunday this could place your response at Level 4.
ReplyDeleteA sloppy reference to Tarantino using slow motion, you need to provide an example (what film/s.
Characters: You have used the generic convention of placing the girl as victim, for example in films such as Animal Kingdom when Josh's girlfriend is entrapped with Josh's Uncle Pope. On the other hand you could explain that unlike thrillers such as Once Upon a Time in America you have placed a female at the centre of the action. The photography student is placed in a threatening position similar to Thelma who encounters the rapist Harlem in the carpark, and like Thelma and Louise you place a strong female at the centre of the action.
Hopefully you can make these not too daunting revisions.